Secretly side by side

A very sweet poem with an ending that made me smile. I do love the style you use, my only suggestion is to make the flow a little more right on than it is. But good job so far...your stuff is good!
Charisma*

I really like this poem because it reminds me of my special someone. i like how in your poem you capture every moment in a relationship!

I love this part:

We're so close
Yet far apart
Neither decide
To open our heart

great job ;)

pili

Again, another beautiful piece of work...

Another wkd poem!!!
hope you feel better soon, and dont let it get you too down as far as i know your a really nice person and i dont like nice people to be sad :P
love jess XxXxXxXx