I can really relate to this poem. its an amazing piece, Great work
xx

Another wkd poem!!!
hope you feel better soon, and dont let it get you too down as far as i know your a really nice person and i dont like nice people to be sad :P
love jess XxXxXxXx

Again, another beautiful piece of work...

I love this part:

We're so close
Yet far apart
Neither decide
To open our heart

great job ;)

pili

I really like this poem because it reminds me of my special someone. i like how in your poem you capture every moment in a relationship!

A very sweet poem with an ending that made me smile. I do love the style you use, my only suggestion is to make the flow a little more right on than it is. But good job so far...your stuff is good!
Charisma*