Oooh wow michael this one is really good it has perfect rhyming and flows wonderfully another awesome poem from a great poet!!

tabby

This is a pretty good poem. i like it

Really good poem
i loved it.
and good choice of words and rhyming.
good work.

I liked the meaning behind this one. the second stanza didn't flow as well as it could with the others to me but it was still very good.

~Retniapdoolb~

I like the way uv repeated the first to lines, really gives a powwerful ending.
u have mentioned Gethsemane in a couple of the poems i have read but i havnt heard of it before, perhaps if u could email me a bit about it i may gain a deeper understnading of this and the other poem...please?

:) xx