Comments : Invisible Tears

  • 18 years ago

    by lizzy

    Wow this is a really great sad touching poem! i feel exactly the same way keep on wrting

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    I feel u on that so, KEEP IT UP 4-REAL HOMIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by creeesta

    This is such a beautiful poem! It really spoke to me because I can easily relate to it especially since my bf just broke up with me. Keep on writing, you have a gifted talent. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    It is those darn invisible tears that can drive us over the edge. I too have those little critters seep within this chest of mine.

    I love how gracefully the words just poured out onto this piece. As always you have written another beautiful work that many, including myself, relate to.

    --Sher

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    This is beautiful. amazing job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    This one will definetely touch a chord with a lot of readers. I know I've got it marked to read ... again ... and again!
    Beautiful write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bogie

    Oh!!! My, I love this poem.
    True love will never die no
    Doubt, as you have written so
    wonderfully. Write On,
    Bogie

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Ok so it's been a while since I've come on to read poetry. I haven't read any of yours in quite some time. I feel so low...lol I'm so horrible about keeping up with the times. Real life certainly catches up to us some times. I surely have missed your writing.

    This piece was awesome...something I feel so many can relate too. Hiding the pain of love is something I know everyone understands and you've written of it so clearly and so powerfully...you're an amazing writer and each new piece I read amazes me even more than the last. You're awesome...KEEP ON WOMAN!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    The most hurtful tears are the one that only your heat feels. very true. another nice poem.

    kind regards,
    just wishes

  • 18 years ago

    by xXjENiXx

    I luv this poem its really sad ur a good writer keep up the good work