Make Me Perfect

"I know that I will never measure up
To her perfect body and mind
But I just can't be the one to stop
Seeking for perfection, so hard to find"

^^I understand completely...I have hated the way I look for so long and I cant help but see the worst in myself, but Im lucky to have friends who tell me otherwise or else I probably would have resorted to worse things...excellent write!

Brooke<3

Sometimes circumstances make us feel as though things are impossible. I think that you can do whatever you put your mind to. Based on the things I've read in your poems, there's something inside you that refuses to die. Something that fights to survive. I don't know what ED is, put if its not too serious, I believe you can overcome your weight problem. I believe in you and I hope one day you will too.

Again, sad poem but from the heart, about personal issues, i reall believe that the media is to blame in making girls feel this way, and we get caugt up in it and I am sorry this is happening to you. but as for your poem, it wasn't the best poem I've read, I think as a writer you could of done it better, but i id read that they were just toughts you were having and needed to get them out, so i'm glad you find poetry as a way of letting out your feelings, I did enjoy reading your poetry, all of it, and appreciate your honest comments as well. hope to read more of your poems soon.

This is so great. i totally connect to it. you really have way with words. don't ever stop writing. your too good at it!!!! i loved this. 5/5

Waht's ED ?