by Juls
Its good. I never saw a poem layed out like this one before but i really like the layout of it. keep up the great work. |
by Gretchen
Dido! I liked the layout its very unique and catches my attention. Good job |
It's still in stanzas, so it is a type of poetry, i have written a few like this, never posted them because i haven't found the time to yet, but i like this type because it gets all of the meotions through without the lengthy lines. I have A LOT of lengthy poems, and i know it drags some readers out to read it all, so this is gd and it isnt time consuming, so its gd, keep up the gd work! |
Very original peice, and also very effective. |
by anna
Very intersted ... good job |
by Little Dot
Great work. Very unique style. You did an amazing job. |
by holly
I like this different to most poems but i found it easy to read and well it just well was very effective xxALLYxx |
by Polly
I like this, it's unique. Love the stylen and layout, very original. |
by Allison
That is a very interesting style to write this in. I really liked it. *5/5* |
Good poem Ilike the way you wrote it.I have seen your poem style layout on this website before, it is not commen way of writing but people do use it once in awhile, I don't know the name of it I just know I have seen some peoms layout like this before. |
by Samantha
Hmm... Love the way you wrote it! Its very unique, the first I've read of its kind... Very nice job! |
by daniel
Nice new writing style, I liked it alot, great job man. |
by Sondos
Very beautiful work here |
by Robert
I like the style its written, its very original. few lines say a lot, and thats what i really like in it. 5/5 |
by Natalie
This is good! Love how you had the one worded feelings, And then adding on to it. You set it out really well! 5/5 =] |
by Kaylee
I'll admit the reason I chose this poem was because of the title. That's a hook right there. Now I loved the layout especially how your first word in each line connected with the ones after. Really jealous! Keep writing, this one was amazing. |
by Juls
We all feel those and about 100+ more feelings! Great work I enjoyed reading. Its one that I havent seen layed out like that. |
Awesome poem, I loved it. It was very well written. keep up the good work. |
by Sole
Pain... when comforting, |
Definatly does sum up "feelings of a year" lol.. another good one! |