Hmmm gd point hun wot does happen ive been wondering myself xxx

Great poem and i love you
*amanda*

Wow. this is incredible. i love it. especially 'the silence that escapes their lips'
that sounds really good.

It flows really well and is really thought provoking. 5/5

Jem

Im not much a Non-rhyme person i only have like 2 poems that dont..but this one spoke out...Greatly Expressed..Greatly Written..And Very True...Thankx for your comments also i appreciate it greatly..
10000/5
~TPOMH~

This is possibly one of the most true poems i have yet to read this describes me in a sense as im sure it does others and i thoroughly enjoyed it as such very well done 5/5
~jacob

Woooooooooooo right on nice poem im glad i joined fish bowl or uhhhhhhhhhhhhh nice poem 5/5

Lol awesome poem hun! I really loved the idea!!!! its orig! keep it up *hugs* and thanks 4 the welcome *grins* ruthie xoxo