Emotional Crypt

by Lies   Feb 22, 2006


Emotional crypt
bound by heavy chains.
There I had lain
in sad existence.
Fragile, weary.
My heart torn open,
awaiting love.

Just tha beginning of a poem.. lemme know what u think so far..

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  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I think it's amazing so far and if this is a sample of what the rest of it will be like I'm sure it will be excellent. Even on it's own it is a beautiful short poem.
    Well done 5/5
    *VioletRaven*