by Cami Feb 23, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I'm all broken up, |
Hey this was great! i'm having a similar problem- i'm fallin' in love with my best guy friend in the world and he means everything and you're right that ya gotsta see some rain b4 the rainbow- i just hope it stops raining soon! keep up the awsome work and if you have time can you check out and commment on my poem down on my knee's and if ya like that one some of my others?? thanx and God bless- i'll keep you and ur sweetheart in my prayers! -erica |
I love this poem! your a great writer, keep up the great work! |
Very nice..the last stanza was perfect..i think it ws the best,the whole poem deserves 5/5..nice work..keep up da good work and take care..thxx fr comment.. |
by Fallen~Tears
Wow i loved this poem especially the part about a heart being two tear drops upside down i never thought about it like that great job...and do you think you could return the favor? |
Hey! thanks for the comment! im accually dont cut and im okay lol. thanks for the comment on the poem, ijsut like to wright about those things hoping to understand it. your a great writer and keep it up! |