Comments : Untitled 2

  • 18 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    I know how u feel....hang in there.

  • 18 years ago

    by Macy

    I can totally realate. i really enjoyed this one. keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Another sweet poem :) Wel lwritten, other than a few grammatical and spelling errors. I'll go through them, just because it would make your poems that bit better :)

    I want to love you forever; I know we’ll make it through

    ; should be a ,

    But baby don’t feel bad there noting that can keep us apart

    there should be there's and noothing, not noting.

    ever felt will soon subsides

    Just take the s off of the end of subside.

    Your showed me I could make it through,

    Your should be You

    and finally

    You are my baby my light my angel my only one

    Would be best separated with commas,

    You are my baby, my light, my angel, my only one

    Apart from those, it is a really great write - I love to read tyour poems because they have so much happiness and love inside them :) Keep writing xXx

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    I'm sorry - I can hardly comment on others spellings when I can't even spell myself :) nothing - not noothing :)

    Peace. [Sole]