State of Suicide

by Washley   Feb 23, 2006


All around the world people die people cry, some give up
we cut ourselves, we like the energy that leaves a nasty mark of
hate from others they see the cuts they know then they tell then we become more upset with ourselves
and this when we give up we give up on the crying and cuting and people. We giveup on socity all together.I have givin up I know it won\'t get better so we choose to end I am not Ashley I am just there a body that don\'t move don\'t think. I was in a State of Suicde

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I like this one. But.. Maybe put them into stanza, It might make it easier to read. I noticed there wasn't many full stops, Or comma's. So yeah. But I did like it :P I loved the first line; "All around the world, People cry, People die."

    Very true! 5/5 Keep it up

    - Natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by amandalynn

    I like your poem it's deep and it's how a lot of ppl feel..i feel like that a lot..great poem though
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by vero

    Wow im very into sad poetry and i definitly like this one its really depressing and that stuck out. hey i really liked it and i can't wait to read more!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Thats really good...life is tough and i know what it's like to just want to give up ..I really think this poem is good

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