Comments : My Empty Soul

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Very powerful Bill... Awesome write!

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Beautifully penned. Such a befiiting way to end to all that you have gone through.

    wishing you the very best, now and always

    shobhana

    thank you very much for your comments on my work. I really appreciate it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Iesha

    I love this poem it reminds me of me and my Girlfriend

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    It is a treasure to find someone who completes you the way your poem describes your beloved. And you couldn't have expressed your feelings for her any better than you did in this piece. What a beautiful declaration of love. As always, this poem was fantastic:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Oh Bill,
    This is truly beautiful and I know exactly where you are coming from with this piece of art. I wish you truly nothing less than pure happiness and I pray that you will continue to grow stronger and happier everyday.
    One day, I too will find peace with the one that I can love and I will be set free.
    Best of luck babe and as always keep that great smile for the world to see!

    --Sher