First comment:):D

um..this poem, i find really depressing. im not sure if you set it to be like that, but wow.
The slight cryptic type of writing keeps me enthralled to the very last word.
i guess something to keep close to you on those lonely, cold nights, your heart, ur soul. dont let anyone take that form you.
Great poem Mike..well done.. top points:P
lots of luv xoxo

I think this is a good poem nkeep it up