Comments : Last Words

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow...scares me that you're thinking of your gravestone..but..
    awesome poem.
    I love the repitition, is it meant to be a song? if not i can defiantely see it being one.
    it's a very true concept, that of thanking people for the time we've had, rather than complaining that they are lost whether it be by death or the normal separations that occur in life.
    Beautiful piece..
    take care xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Nice poem Hunny,
    A little morbid you have your grave stone picked out already but hey lol different strokes for different fokes.... yes I just said fokes, lol *hugs* I love you babe, I will comment on all you new/old poems soon, when I find the time, even my mornings are becomming hectic, I missed you lats night.... I love you

    Jenn

    Ps:The repitition was highhhhhhly effective=D