GREAT POEM LOVED IT ..
I THINK TOO MY SELF THAT ALL THE TIME

IF AM DEAD..
AND I WISHED I WAS..BUT THERS SOME THINGS I WOULD WANT TO STAY FOR..AND YOU GOTTA THIINK ABOUT THAT

NICK

Nice poem,it's great i think
but it needs some more work on it ,i mean i get what are you trying to pull up here,nice metaphors
but you should work more on it
try to make discreption more clearly and accurate,and try to rearrange the lines to make it more structured

great poem,keep it up