Beautifully written. This poem touched me deeply for reasons I won't go into here...very moving, powerful piece. I love it!

Such a wonderful write and such honest
questions....Beautiful 5/5....

Shelby

Beautiful poem, I loved it! Welcome to teh group ^_^ I look forward to reading more of your work!

Beautiful poem, I loved it! Welcome to teh group ^_^ I look forward to reading more of your work!

Beautiful in every line; the questions you ask are so deep, although simple.

great work! love and luck
shobhana

This is just so powerful and heart wrenching... Beautifully written!!

Very nicely done, wonderful job!!!

Ohhh I love that last stanza!! You are so freakin' talented at writing poems...goll... you never cease to amaze me. I loved this one, and I hope things work out with whoever this is about. xoxo

Wow, this is the first poem that i am reading of urs and i am sure that i hv been missing something all the time.
u r really amazing.

u wrote such simple feelings in such special way.

all the best and take care
5/5

Wow awesome i liked it have you told this guy how you feel? You should..

Congrats for coming 5th in my contest, i loved thisd poem, very well written.
it was really good to read.
keep it up
Tara-Kay
xxx

All I can say is W-O-W!
So many truthful questions,
Hope you get them answered!
I love it lots!
Plz comment on mine!
Thanks!
~*~Cindy~*~