My solitude

Great peice, your contnet is well expressed and flows wel throughout making for a great peice with som fantastic descriptions

The best thing about this for me is the careful choice of language used....lacks structure though..

[lostlaureate- come find me]

I think you had some good descriptions in this and you certainly depicted the "solitude" of the title in the poem. You wording is good, however, I'm not too keen on the format or your punctuation and grammar use.
Some suggestions: Shorten the lines or sort it into a more poetical format, sounds picky I know but poetical formats can help to make a poem stronger. Also think about capitalising every "I" and using capital letters at the beginning of sentences/stanzas.
In the second stanza the rhyme on the third line seems slightly forced. This is because it doesn't sound like a complete sentence "...sustaining my lack" makes me ask lack of what?
Anyway good job, some simple touch ups could make this poem fantastic. Keep writing.

Wow that is very very good. very short but says a lot.

5/5

I like these forms of peoms alot
you didnt a nice job with the words
5/5
~Bloodscars~