Walking Away

by Katie   Feb 23, 2006


Finally in time
my anger had cooled,
And you were that close
to having me fooled.
I could cling to ur promise
of 'changes to come,'
But i wont hang around
for another let down.
So before, once again,
you leave me behind,
It's me leaving you,
no regrets in my mind.
Like i should have before,
im walking away,
To never turn back
on some other day.
So take a good look,
but all you will see
Is the shadow of a girl
who is finally free.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Normally I don't read poems when they're grouped together into one paragraph but this one had me reading until I was done. I loved your last line and to me I related to it in some way or at least I'd want to be like that. Somebody who's finally free.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This is awesome! I love the part:
    "Is the shadow of a girl
    who is finally free."
    You did a great job on this! 5/5 =]

    luv natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    I really liked it......I read a couple of poems of yours before also and liked them......you could organize them a little better but they come out nicely

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    Nice rhymes, great poem,a little sad. well done 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    You could probly louse the line "on some other day" I don't think it needs it but thats just me. Its a well thought out and writen poem over all.

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