Eh, I really like the flow of it. It goes good except the right exactly in the middle. ... Yeah, other than that, it was well written. ^_^

-Tony

Gr8 poem..i no how u feel...hmm luvd it XoX

I really like this it flows really easily and a good topic too, well done xxALLYxx

^_^ Good good.

*eats it*

okay okay, no i didn't eat your poem... I was just- Okay nevermind lol.

Good work.

-Tony

Waw can't say anythin just GO GIRL... very good job

Wow.. this is absolutely amazing.. gr8 job with the rhyme and the flow was reli gud.. ur words wer very powerful and full of triuph, i shud say.. i totally loved ur last stanza

So take a good look,
but all you will see
Is the shadow of a girl
who is finally free.

i loved it the most
keep up the talent
take care
Nouna

This poem is very good! i loved it! 5/5** great job!!

Content was great. Except for the exception "come;down" all the rhymes worked great. good job

Heck yeah thats teh way to do it leave him before he leaves you again heartbroken. Uh huh good job nice flow!

I love the flow of this... the only one line that really stood out was "for another let down", somehow didn't quite fit the rest of the flow... that's my personal opinion of course. Overall, I loved it. Great write... keep up the good work! 5/5

I really liked this and thought the message was great. The flow was fine with the one exception, but as I like free verse it doesn't jump out at me to change it.
Cheers.

Wow, really good, i can really relate, reminds me of my relationship with my parents, i somehow i wish they could read it, then they would know exactly what i mean, you put it in words perfectly,well 5/5 good job

Oh wow. I like this alot Katie. I can completely relate to this, as I'm sure you know from my poems. This is excellent.

Wrttin nicely words went well to gether..i wonldt changed a thing in it ..5/5

You could probly louse the line "on some other day" I don't think it needs it but thats just me. Its a well thought out and writen poem over all.

You could probly louse the line "on some other day" I don't think it needs it but thats just me. Its a well thought out and writen poem over all.

Nice rhymes, great poem,a little sad. well done 5/5

I really liked it......I read a couple of poems of yours before also and liked them......you could organize them a little better but they come out nicely

This is awesome! I love the part:
"Is the shadow of a girl
who is finally free."
You did a great job on this! 5/5 =]

luv natalie x-x

Normally I don't read poems when they're grouped together into one paragraph but this one had me reading until I was done. I loved your last line and to me I related to it in some way or at least I'd want to be like that. Somebody who's finally free.