by -Ghostship Fidelity- Feb 23, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Taking pills behind locked doors |
Really dark. Some deep thoughts. A few spelling errors that didn't mess with the overall piece. Some cool imagery and some really great words. Something that was pretty good and well dark. Liked how just the words added to this. |
That poem was good... just you have better poems... it is really good.... i love you writeing... you are so... talented... |
Wow...this was...dark! lol...it gave me chills...it was so deep. great imagery too...great word choice...it probably contributed to how powerful the poem is...i loved it...great job. |
by LadyPearl
Creative, great word choice. You can still improve your flow |
WOW!!! very dark, but absolutely amazing!!! fantastic imagery; creates a verrrrry dark and creepy mood. very powerful, and very brilliant. |