You Dont know

by David Marshall   Feb 23, 2006


This isn't that good but i needed to write it, look for subliminal message..its very easy to see.

I wish you knew how I feel.
Loving you forever.
Love I reveal.

Any time I see your face,
Living in this happy place.
Walking to wards you,
Again you never knew.
You thought nothing of me,
Silently leaving thee.

Losing you is what I fear.
One day at a time I wait.
Vague my feelings must be.
Eventually becomes too late.

Right now I want to hold you.
And never let go.
Chanting a prayer,
How I want you to know.
Every night i think of you,
Looking back of what we went through.

© Copy-righted by David A Marshall

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Adn again with the acrostic adn rhyme! you really are very good. i think i might try this sometime. kool idea.

    Suzie
    P.S. I didn't neccessarily vote on the same ones i commented on.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Great job for your first time. I love these types of poems!

  • 18 years ago

    by anna

    Like it very much.. it's very beautifull

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Thats really good i loved the subliminal message there well done xxALLYxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    SMASHING OLD CHAP, admirable try for first use of subliminalness, jolly good if I do say so myself