by David Marshall Feb 23, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
This isn't that good but i needed to write it, look for subliminal message..its very easy to see. |
Adn again with the acrostic adn rhyme! you really are very good. i think i might try this sometime. kool idea. |
Great job for your first time. I love these types of poems! |
by anna
Like it very much.. it's very beautifull |
by holly
Thats really good i loved the subliminal message there well done xxALLYxx |
by Alex Marlatt
SMASHING OLD CHAP, admirable try for first use of subliminalness, jolly good if I do say so myself |