Wow that was nice! the subliminal message was "I'll always love Rachel" right? well i liked the poem! 5/5

SMASHING OLD CHAP, admirable try for first use of subliminalness, jolly good if I do say so myself

Thats really good i loved the subliminal message there well done xxALLYxx

Like it very much.. it's very beautifull

Great job for your first time. I love these types of poems!

Adn again with the acrostic adn rhyme! you really are very good. i think i might try this sometime. kool idea.

Suzie
P.S. I didn't neccessarily vote on the same ones i commented on.