Wow! i really like this poem. great idea and i loved the feelings. great job.
Emma 5/5

A truly magnificent moment in history, i shall never forget it!!! lol. in other words, i think it rocked : )

Suzie

I love it! And sometimes thats true for some people, The only true friend thay have is inside there head. Keep you head high and keep smilin' =]
5/5 It was great!

- natz x0x

Wow - impressive poetry - and a really sad tale to tell - I hope this doesn't relate to you :) The only thing thatneeds sorting is the line

I must ignore my friendsâ?? sarcastic tones

The weird little punctuation things can easily be edited away :)

Peace. [Sole]

Thats so sad....
:(
love
~Em

Good job.. it flowed nicely and moved along at a steady pace.. nice one!!