Hmmm... who is this about? lol
wonderful wonderful wonderful
you. are. amazing.

i love this poem.

This is beautiful!So full of love and so sensual.I especially like how you combined it all with the storm image(I love storms).Your use of language and imagery is impressive.This is love.Really a fantastic piece.

Very sweet, your imagery is strong and your feelings tangible. I really enjoyed this, and though it is long it is not repetitive at all and you come up with new ideas/descriptions throughout. Well done :)

Awesome poem it's cool how you combined the storm and the love together good job