Comments : Untold Version Of Me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Holly

    Brilliant :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    *Sniff* I love it my sweety... it's amazingly writtin!!! I don't know a title. but I think that whatever you come up with is gonna be brilliant :D
    I LOVE YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH MUCH

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    Heather babe,
    its my favorite poem of yours
    with all the stuff you've been throught i feel the emotions and the point you describe comes across my mind.
    I loves it just likes you
    but i g2g i miss you
    My head is cloudy,
    my brain isn't thinking right.
    My heart is calling his name,
    my eyes are watching the world past me by.
    My love is going on without a worry about me in the world,
    my hope is losing in this fate I have been get in life.
    My ears have heard is all before,
    and my tears, I have no more.
    Every pain I feel is just another thing in life,
    and every heartache I got through always gives me the untold version of me.
    With these words and lies that cover my eyes,
    I am losing in this battle called life.
    With those last days I am losing my way through another horrible day.

    My head is cloudy,
    my brain isn't thinking right.
    My heart is calling his name,
    my eyes are watching the world past me by.
    My love is going on without a worry about me in the world,
    my hope is losing in this fate I have been get in life.
    My ears have heard is all before,
    and my tears, I have no more.
    Every pain I feel is just another thing in life,
    and every heartache I got through always gives me the untold version of me.
    With these words and lies that cover my eyes,
    I am losing in this battle called life.
    With those last days I am losing my way through another horrible day.

    ~Tess~