by Steven Beesley Feb 24, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Callous Tongue: |
An excellent piece.The sadness and bitterness is conveyed so well and I can so relate to much of this poem-made me stop and think about my own life (more sadness and regret on my part than the bitterness-but still touched me deeply).Extremely well written, excellent imagery and such a powerful ending. |
by Simon Hayes
Wow! Deep, sad and moving... A damn good write Steve!!! |
by shobhana kumar
Is this how most of us lead our lives? lost in our own world of trivial desires and spiteful emotions? you have described it beautifully Steve. |