Comments : Dard mein simtaye huye dil ki koshish

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    This one is also wonderful.......5/5

    well this is my fav one till now....
    i love reading hindi poems , so keep writing dear

    Bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    5/5........dard bhi kya chez hai.......i guess its part of life. very well written.

    sonam
    ~HUGS~

  • 18 years ago

    by chavii

    Dard se zindagi hai , zindagi se dard par yah safar nahi rukta kisi saksh par..

    Bahut pyaari shayari likhi hai ipsi , enjoyed reading u very good with words both in english n hindi.
    Thanks for ur sweet welcome :)

    love
    chavii.