Wishing

by holly   Feb 24, 2006


Wishing
that you loved me
that i could treat you right
like the special someone you are
in her eyes you can do nothing correctly
still you guys stay together, WHY?
i love you so much more
i want you more
wishing

*This is my first attempt at this poetry style.
**Rictameter

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Godo style..i lvoe it when people try new things :)

    lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Great job.. I know how that feels.. You did a good job for that being your first atempt at that type of poem..

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by u alwayz made me smile

    Hey there,
    thanx for commenting on my poem it meant alot. i really like this poem i thought it was so good. take care
    ~*much love*~
    ~*GhEtTo LiCiOuS*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    Very sweet, Keep up the good work!

    Thanks for you c/r

    -Josiah

  • 18 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    I don't even think i could have done as well for a first attempt! it's awsum, thanks heaps for your comment on my poem! your doing really well, keep it up!.............luv em

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