by Daniel J Feb 24, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
It's whispered amongst the flowers, |
by Sara
Awww that was sooo good and descriptive!....can you please comment my new poem ME AND YOU...thanks!!! 5/5 |
I like this its sweet |
by Batscout
I feel like I can see, hear, smell and taste spring after reading your poem. |
Great peice, unforced rhymes good flow and fantastic content. |
by Jaime
You are like the King of the Seasons, my friend. The words you choose are just magical, this is an amazing poem, particularly the last stanza. Very few people can rhyme like that without sounding forced, and you did a pretty good job with that. Take care, |