by Gretchen
Awww thats so sad. Once a cheater always a cheater. You deserve better!!! |
by Allison
This one was good too! I really liked it. Keep it up. *5/5* |
Excellent Job through expressing yourself.....Amazing Amazing Amazing..my only suggestion..would be to make the poem a little longer..To have that poem so Great people are gonna want to read more but will be heart broken because its short..Try to make it a lil longer..i know u can do it |
by Hurtingsoul
Very well written you gave out very well flowing emotions. i really liked it |
by Daze
Good, poem, even though i can't relate because i've never been married, i've been cheatedon and i've cheated myself, but good poem. 5/5 |
by Bridgette
Aw this is such a sad & powerful poem. but in the second line in the third stanza where it says:That you wouldn't call you ex. I think that you mean Your ex. Just thought I'd let you know. But overall this is a great poem. 5/5** |
Nice again. u have a gift! keep up the excellent work! 5/5 |
by Tara Kay
A great poem. |
Aww :( this was yet again, another heartfelt poem. filled with so much emotion. well done. |