Comments : Adultery

  • 18 years ago

    by Gretchen

    Awww thats so sad. Once a cheater always a cheater. You deserve better!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    This one was good too! I really liked it. Keep it up. *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by ~TornBecauseOfYou~

    Excellent Job through expressing yourself.....Amazing Amazing Amazing..my only suggestion..would be to make the poem a little longer..To have that poem so Great people are gonna want to read more but will be heart broken because its short..Try to make it a lil longer..i know u can do it

    But other then that amazing job
    5/5 no doubt
    ~The Broken Man~

  • 18 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    Very well written you gave out very well flowing emotions. i really liked it
    take care
    HS

  • 18 years ago

    by Daze

    Good, poem, even though i can't relate because i've never been married, i've been cheatedon and i've cheated myself, but good poem. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aw this is such a sad & powerful poem. but in the second line in the third stanza where it says:That you wouldn't call you ex. I think that you mean Your ex. Just thought I'd let you know. But overall this is a great poem. 5/5**

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Nice again. u have a gift! keep up the excellent work! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    A great poem.
    you have talent, just don't be afraid to take chances with your writing, put some real energy and emotion into it, to make it a greater poem that it already is!
    keep writng,
    love Tara-Kay

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aww :( this was yet again, another heartfelt poem. filled with so much emotion. well done.
    Much love and many kisses,
    Bex