I like this poem, It reminds me of how I'm when I'm down and not doing so good. For the past week I have been feeling like that, I know how you feel, I hope things good well and good writing...

Good Job!!

-Josiah

It reminds me of a few books I've read... And myself a few years ago. I hope she drops the masquerade soon, it tears people apart in the end. This poem was very well written, and definitely captured my attention through the whole thing.

5 out of 5

-Tony

Very nice

This is a good poem. i like it. keep up the good work

This is a powerful poem and I really enjoyed reading it.....Great job...,Thanks for the comment...I always return the favor

Wow!! this poem is sooo good!! it made me cry... i loved it!! 5/5** that was great

This poem was great, 5/5 I really like the rhyme scheme.

Very powerfully written peice with some stron feelings.

5/5

Wow, loved it. 'To bad that its a mask
And she holds it firmly in place'- Hotness. lol, keep up the good work!

Wow Alyson,
Nice Job. I love your poems. You write some amazing pomes. Wouldn't you guys agree with me? Gurl you have some talent...You should like publish a book or something.....Your so great!

This is a very strong poem i like the way youve expressed it, and its very original too wd xxALLYxx

I like this one. It's very interesting the way you set it up around a photograph without being cliche'. Good job.

Haunting. very spooky. i really liked the flow, and your rhyming was clear and unforced. exellent work

Ruby

WOW!! wat an AMAZING work you have written, and the rhyming was good. I LOVED IT!! sad but lovely!!!!

Im not sure..but i think your talking about masking your feelings right?...well if you are..then thats what i have to do every day..and its not easy...good poem.

Wow that was a very nice poem!...i loved it!....hidding your feeling is hard to do...5/5!
~*Linz*~

Congratulations on winning the contest, i really liked this poem sad but a very clever take on the topic well done :D xx ALLY xx

This is great. LOVED how you used it as it was set in a photo. Really good imagination!! 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Excellent idea - with the image of the girl, forever trapped in fake happiness and time within the photograph. Very creative indeed. The poem flowed nicely as well, and the rhymes were good. Very well written.

Peace. [Sole]

Brilliant job, loved the way you have worded thing's and it flows fantastically. keep writing and take care hun sarah x