The title wasn't strong but it fit in with what it was about. I did like this poem because of the imagery and it reminded me of my own "sad photographs" what I didn't like was that you said she has sadness nobody knows but earlier you had said: So her feelings she doesn't hide

Shouldn't be be that she does hide her feelings :)

Wow 5/5.... maybe ull be as good as me someday
lol

You really helped me to step in side this photo your words added dimension. This was so well crafted..the say a picture speaks a thousand words and your poem aroused a million eomtions...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Hey aly,
nice poem. I love it. You're a really good poet.

Awww thats so..easy to relate too. Just don't show anything and something good is bounded to happen.. Great job capturing people's perspective.

Excellent poem. The imagery is great, keep writing. 5/5

Aww this was so sad. keep your head up huni

much love and many kisses,
bex

Wow, the ending got me... I forgot for a second that it was titled Photograph... really nicely done. Flow was good and rhyme was too! Great job!

Ciao~

Wow. I feel like the whole time you had this total idea of what you were writing. Which is good, obviously. I really like the flow of it all. Some places it was rough, but it sounded intentional. 5/5