This poem, is OK, you should really consider using proper grammer.

Well im kinda on that kind thing with my bf.. sometime i just cant be with him and see what he really been doing.. ofc i love him a lot but i am going find out someday if that really lie if he really want to be with me..ur poem is very good to understand.. so keep it up holla

Jus showin u sum love really good but the last line didnt ryme wit it