To my bestfriend
by Cassandra Feb 25, 2006
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So what is the toughest decision you may have had to make? How bout: Is it safe to hold on? or safer to let go? Or how bout, Is it worth it to hold on? or will it just disappoint you in the end? or, Do you have enough strength to hold on long enough to achieve what you want? Or will it just drain EVERYTHING out of you, and take so much time there isn't anything left? Or do you take an opportunity with someone else and risk the chance that the person you love will come around at the same time? Or do you miss it and all others in fear you will miss the one you love? Or what if you were me and you have to ask yourself these and many more questions everyday that you still don't have the answers to yet? My toughest decision right now is simply this: Do i keep holding on to my love, all this uncertainty, and all this pain? Or do i let go of it all and wonder 5 years from now......... "what if i held on a little longer?" |
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18 years ago
by Andi
Im not sure whether this poem was ment to be about a boy or a friend. but i relate every way. there is a boy i love more than my life and he doesnt feel the same but i cant let go. and i kno in the end all thats ever gonna come out of it is pain. and then i have an old friend who her and i just called it quits cuz we weren't strong enough. we fought and we decided it was easier to just quit and give up. i wouldnt recomend doing that unless u don't want her/him to be a part of your life. cuz giving up just adds to a long list of questions. i loved the point to this poem and its written well. although i think its a little easier to read poems written in a lines/stanza format. but i loved the ideas and word choice. def keep up the good work. id love it if u could comment on my poems.
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18 years ago
by lOVER
I held on for 5 yrs to a guy who felt the same way about me, but nothing happened coz we were too scared. i dunno what of. but i know that i wouldnt be able to live without him now.
gd writing. just put the sentences in paragraphs so its quicker to read.
xx
