I held on for 5 yrs to a guy who felt the same way about me, but nothing happened coz we were too scared. i dunno what of. but i know that i wouldnt be able to live without him now.

gd writing. just put the sentences in paragraphs so its quicker to read.

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Im not sure whether this poem was ment to be about a boy or a friend. but i relate every way. there is a boy i love more than my life and he doesnt feel the same but i cant let go. and i kno in the end all thats ever gonna come out of it is pain. and then i have an old friend who her and i just called it quits cuz we weren't strong enough. we fought and we decided it was easier to just quit and give up. i wouldnt recomend doing that unless u don't want her/him to be a part of your life. cuz giving up just adds to a long list of questions. i loved the point to this poem and its written well. although i think its a little easier to read poems written in a lines/stanza format. but i loved the ideas and word choice. def keep up the good work. id love it if u could comment on my poems.
andi