by Kim Feb 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Swept up in the perfect moment |
by Marc Ortiz
Aw its really sad.. anyway good choice of words! keep up the good work! |
by Kelsie
Wow. simply. amazing. |
Wow gr8 work again i like ur work. it has so much detail, it really paints a picture. anyway, 5/5again |
by jed
Nice flow, emotively powerful...definitely made me feel the pain... |
by Darien
Kim, this is a very good poem. I am so glad I made you join!!! I get to read some really good poems from you :D |