Comments : Fly Away From Here

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Mike,

    This poem seems very...lyrical, is there any chance of putting it to music? I think it would make a fantastic song. That desire to grow, and to look a head is one many people I know feel this as well.

    Structure, typical yet very...suited to this, I strangely attracted to this poem lol I really love the repition and

    Somewhere there's a flower,
    That I've never grown,
    Somewhere there's a heart,
    That I'll never feel.

    Well done hunny,
    I love you to the end
    Jenn