My love story

by StefQ   Feb 25, 2006


1st day of school
the day i met you
amazed by your eyes
i didn't know what 2 do

Every day i wondered what if...
Just picturing you and me together
being desperately in love...
Forever and ever

After a week admiring you from a distance
i took a shot and started talking with you
We became friends , and later close friends
so i wondered if you felt this way too

We started talking more often
we called each other and talked all night long
We just kept getting closer and closer
and more and more feelings came along

Another week later you asked me
to come and see you horseback-riding
and that was our first "date"
We had fun and the time was flying

After the lesson ended we went for a walk
We went to a park,sat and looked at each other
Then you closed your eyes and came closer
From that moment on i didn't want another

You raised me to a place
Higher then anyone has gone before
A place where i had no fears I'd have to face
I wanted to stay there forever more

You taught me how to fly
And together we flew to the sky
Hand by hand , heart by heart
At that moment nothing could take us apart

Except the week you went to a camp
we ware inseparable
It felt like you ware gone for a life time
It was almost unbearable

After that one week you came back
And i was happy as can be
Cuz then i knew you're the only thing i lack
The only one that makes me complete

I gave you all my love
You ware the only one I desire
The look in your eyes
Just set my heart on fire

But then came that horrible moment
That you thought it was enough
I acted like it doesn't matter
But on the inside i couldn't stay tough

That day i looked back on the good times we had
I never thought that something could take us apart
My soul just burst in tears
Cuz in the end you really did brake my heart

* i know it's long but please rate and comment :) btw this is just part one ;)

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  • 18 years ago

    by StefQ

    Posted part 2 for who want's the read it ;) and thnx for the comments :)

  • 18 years ago

    by *inex*

    The poem is great...its soo sweet....**;)

  • 18 years ago

    by *Amber Faith.* ©

    This was great. Can't for for part 2! =]

  • 18 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Wowwwww i lvd it it meltd my hart 2 cnt wait fr da nxt 1!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sara

    Yeah, wonderful poem. really looking forward to part 2!