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  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Matt dont feel alone.
    You have helped me in my times of need,
    You were my shoulder to cry on,
    I've felt a sense of trust that i thought would never occure.
    The thought of losing such an important part of happiness,
    I fear i would never smile again.

    I know I'm not Suzie, the one you love so dearly,
    I know I too have felt this way,
    But Matthew Hayward.
    I am Your Friend.

    anyway, the poem was great, if anyone says otherwise they should be shot.

    ~Emma

  • 18 years ago

    by President Dead

    ^^Then Shoot Me^^
    It's not Great, it's pretty good but I wouldn't go as far as great, but then again, what do i know?

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    I liked it. quite enjoyable. well done.

    XoXoXo, Suzie

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Oh god dayum!!!!!!!

    That was.
    WOAH!
    Dark and deep and enticingly beautiful. I love, no adore, the way i was written.
    You're such a great poet.
    Keep up the fantastical work!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    That was really good and really sad, well done. I guess i'm glad I can't really relate to that kind of feeling, but you could feel the pain and bitterness in the poem. 5/5
    Helen

  • 18 years ago

    by Lestat

    Amazing stuff
    Hi! Its lestat xD.. remember me?
    I am the weirdo that you talked to on the chat .. the other day
    They banned me .. idiots xD
    Oh well
    Love your poems, You got alot of talent

  • 18 years ago

    by stargirl49

    I loved it!! keep up the good work!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Another Chemical Romance

    Omg your awesome!!!! i love how it starts "have you ever heard a rainbow cry? have you ever seen a godess die?' its brillent!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by your loving sistertwin

    That was beautiful, it sounds like what goes on in my head! Wonderful poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    No one understands you, don't they. I'm sure alot of writers don't understand you either, even though they go on and on about similar things. You can just tell when its real and when its not. You're for real.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenn

    "Why do I question everything?
    When all I do is lose,
    Why do I question everything?
    Since you are my muse"

    I loved this. Flow is amazing, subtle, sorrowful, and practically alive. 5/5

    Jenn