Hani, this is very conusing, I don;t understand what you mean by each stanza.
like you start first with the ocean, then BOM lighting and thunder, and then life, and then this and that, like, come on, elbaorate and make it a little better. I know you can do much better then this.

love you always,
Nada

I think this poem is incredible Kenshin ...
Some very interesting detail within the stanza's ....
I think the stanza I love the most would be .

With each slash,
I think of a hardship gone
Lighting being my solution,
Slashing down on my problems.
Looking forward to reading more

This nature story truly perplexes me. You have turned a story on thunder and lighting, into a sad poem at the end. Which is truly a unique thing to do. You described the scenary and you added the emotion to produce a spectacular poem.

One thing though, your first line the "clam" should be "calm"

"Another bolt is born,
Replacing the ones that die." I liked this what a profound concept you managed to attach to something so natural nice use of pathetic fallacy here...great poem...

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