Vanished

by Lonely Heart .ღ.   Feb 25, 2006


All happiness has vanished
All hope I've had is now gone
Smiles in my world seem to have now been banished

Too weak to keep going
This has taken the best of me
This pain just keeps growing
My heart is torn every one can see

My cause of death will be love
I will die from a broken heart
Theres no such thing as an angel from above
This spike of pain will never depart

I can never move on
I've been spoiled with happiness for too long
The pain is here from dusk till dawn
I don't know how much longer I can stay strong

Can nothing stop these tears?
Is this beyond repair?
Nothing is ever answered most of all my prayers
Then again.. why would anyone care?

Drowning in a world of sorrow
Just stand by and ignore my cries
Its not going to get better not today not tomorrow
You'll just see a broken soul when you look into my eyes

Whats the point to keep fighting for life?
I'm on the edge of life or death
Everyday I'm living in strife
Only he can decide my last breath

This moment may die in your memory
But this feeling will live on in my heart
I'll never forget the day my dreams were torn apart

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  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    There are moments in all of our lives, when it seems like everything around us is falling appart. But no matter how dark the day, we must not give up. The last 2 months of my life have been so far the most painfull of my life, but I know, that someday things will get better. Keep your head up..
    Good poem aswell...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This poem was amazing! i can definitely relate to it! It almost made me cry, & it would have if i wasnt trying to be strong..lol. but yeah this poem was beautifully written & i loved it! 5/5**

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    That was sad, I can relate very much to this, you did an excellent job choosing words to use, and I personlly think you're great
    "Whats the point to keep fighting for life?
    I'm on the edge of life or death
    Everyday I'm living in strife
    Only he can decide my last breath"
    I loved that part excellent

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Wonderful, you did an amazing job. So sad and full of emotion I absolutely LOVED it!!!
    ~~Sweetie

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ghostship Fidelity-

    .... .... Very good. Very heart breaking as well. But don't worry I'm not taking points off for that, lol. It's very well structured. There are a few places it just didn't flow right in my head. Try reading it aloud to yourself once. Or maybe I'm just going insane, which wouldn't be surprising lol. Overall, I liked it.

    Good job,
    Tony

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