Comments : Story not poem (of a 16 yr. old who's parents just divorced)

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew

    I liked it it was very different from anything i`ve read. It`s good to go into someone else`s head and feel their pain. Good Job 5/5
    Drew

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew

    Oh by the way I hope you get a chance to read some of my other writes.I`d like your feed back also.
    Drew

  • 17 years ago

    by this is only the beggining

    Wow this is so good.did you write this or did she?