Sorry for swearing but this poem is fuking amazing, it really has justified what im feeling right now, this poem is great i really am absolutly amazed that words can describe how im feeling and you\'ve got it down to a T. Again this is superb keep up the good work 5/5

Amazing poem. i feel the same way towards my ex.
5/5
-lauren

Omg i love this poem. its great. its the same with me and my ex. keep up the good work

Hey excellent poem. It rhymes really well. Keep up the good work!
5/5
Bec xx

Woow i luv this poem!!!! awesome riting!!! keep it up its gr8!!! XoX

I really like this poem. it has a great feel to it. i feel this way about a person. i understand. nice job.
Emma 5/5

Wow babe this poem is excellent i love it you have a great way of words excellent job

As if i saw my recent experience flash by again.....sweet nothings and regret, i totally relate. u did a really good job with expressing it. keep up faith

Excelent poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. You have a lot of talent. *5/5*

Although the content was good your rhymes were very simple. More complex rhyming can really make a good poem great. Also this should be in the explict section lol i dont care just make sure a mod doesn't get on you case!

I love this poem! as well as everyother poem you ahev ever writting, you are an amazing writer and i dont know how many times i could keep tleling you that, but dont quit!

The rhyme scheme is very effective as it shows your anger and almost scorn, especially the lines

I'll laugh at your funeral and smile when you're dead

Well Done
All the Best
Sondos

Oh my god. That poem is EXACTLY how I feel about my exboyfriend. I LOVE it and I relate to it 110%!! GOOD WORK!!

Great rhymes, nice flow

Wow, very intense poem, i could defenitly feel that, made me think about someone i know till the last part, 5/5 though, good job

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Once and again...good job. Nothing much else to say

I cant really relate.. but your anger and hate is very apparent. nice.

I thought it was a really good, if not great poem, until I got to the curse word and the ending. It wasn't bad but it just seemed to be a hate poem instead of what I thought it could have been maybe one of regret? I'm still giving you a 5 because of most of the start and middle.

Do I hear a bit of love, too? I really like this poem, because it represents (to me) the despair you go through when you're rejected. I don't know if that's what it meant but I really enjoyed it.