Wow ! this poem is so deep & dark... really touched me deep
great work
5/5
love
amy

Wow, Amazing write. I loved it. Has awesome Flow and Ryhme. good Job.

~Joe~

Strong, powerful words - but it seems to cover up for hidden emotions - well thought out. Though the rhyming missed out a little at times, the flow was great, and the meaning was excellent.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow, really powerfull!! i can really relate to this one, nice job!!!

Wow, short but very powerful. I liked

A year wasted on love's regret
I hate the fact we ever met
I don't like it now that I hate you
But pain is all you put me through
And that was it and nothing but
A relationship built on lies & mistrust
So when all else fails run to your knife
I don't care, take your f-cking life

Very powerful and made me think about some stuff, (not the best when you have a headache but still) I loved it enough to give it a 5/5 too.

Also Welcome to my Favourites.

Yours Truly,
Bryce

Wow

Wow! harsh.. I LOVE IT !!! lol... i can totaly relate.. great job!

That was excellent. I love how I felt her strength in resisting the guy who was whispering to her and stuff. I love how you write so stay awesome!

I like this poem very meaningful. Keep up the good work.

I really liked this poem. There were a few times when it didn't flow as wel but you made up for that in the end. You can feel your emotions in this poem.

Great work

--Steph

Hey long time no comment lol
i like this poem i dont know if ive ever read it before
its been so long lol
well hope u like my new poems if ya ever stop by and read them.
i like ur profile its long and funny lol
~lots of love~
ByE