Fading Away To Forgotten (Double Etheree)

by Lu   Feb 25, 2006


She's
grown old
tired, weak
forgotten soul
age her enemy
time passes in a blur
her once beautiful body
like a delicate sand sculpture
silky bronzed skin,one of perfection
washing away, fading, now forgotten

her painful cries of sadness,unnoticed
family has long now betrayed her
memories hold her fragile hand
comfort to her lonesome heart
tears fall from ancient eyes
flowing through a maze
of wrinkled skin
resting upon
frail ,weak
hands

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  • 18 years ago

    by IlliteracyKills

    I really like this, very interesting picture it put in my mind, job well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    That is different but i like it. 5/5 good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashly

    This poem is amazing you take the most powerful words to describe what u want the readers to know. its perfect i love it you did a great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Yep thats him

    I loved this poem my town just a a murder suicide that involved two elderly people i loved it and it almost mad me cry!
    Trust_no_one

  • 18 years ago

    by May Lee

    You paint the picture perfectly with your choice of words, A+

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