Ooooh, I like this! It's beautiful in it's simplicity.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Oh Luanne, this is perfect! I love this senyru! The best I've ever read, incredible poem!

WOW! This is so wonderfully done... A truly amazing Senryu!!

I wasn't aware three little lines could say so much! I am breathless after reading this. Incredible!!

hugs and smiles,
Mary

5/5 Short sweet and 2 the point. I liked it a lot b/c it was real, it really does express wat a poet does.

I'm breathless...literally...oohh I liiikkkeeee...that was very good!! In three tiny little lines you said a MILLION things...awesome!!! Hope you're well~~