Comments : Don't Cry

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    The sincerity in this write is felt throughout ..

    I can't decide if my favorite part is:
    The full moon, washes away,
    The sad song, with its spreading peace

    or this part :
    Like a whirlwind, I'll run through the city,
    If I'm ever called,by your emotions.

    Wonderfully written piece , I enjoyed it from beginning to end ...

    P.S Thank you for catching my spelling error on the Haiku ....I must have been sleeping..lol
    I also changed it quite a bit I didn't really like how it sounded either ...Thanks for your honest comment , much appreciated...

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    WOW....I think I just fell in love with your words! Marry me! haha just joking!

    First welcome to CC&P I am a member as well! Looking forward to getting to know you

    Secondly! WOW! I'm so shocked at how well written this was. You have a very creative style to your writing! I am loveing it and I'm looking forward to reading more!
    5/5 awesome!
    Chels