I can't decide if my favorite part is:
The full moon, washes away,
The sad song, with its spreading peace
or this part :
Like a whirlwind, I'll run through the city,
If I'm ever called,by your emotions.
Wonderfully written piece , I enjoyed it from beginning to end ...
P.S Thank you for catching my spelling error on the Haiku ....I must have been sleeping..lol
I also changed it quite a bit I didn't really like how it sounded either ...Thanks for your honest comment , much appreciated...
WOW....I think I just fell in love with your words! Marry me! haha just joking!
First welcome to CC&P I am a member as well! Looking forward to getting to know you
Secondly! WOW! I'm so shocked at how well written this was. You have a very creative style to your writing! I am loveing it and I'm looking forward to reading more!
5/5 awesome!
Chels