Rupturing Safety Precautions

by -Ghostship Fidelity-   Feb 25, 2006


-----A firefly dances across obscured skies
-And the bellow of a jet plane sends it spinning
-While a collateral blanket of bombs descends
------Suddenly I feel parallel to them
------------Diminishing rapidly
------Head first into the frigid terrain
------And in the springtide I will bloom
--------Unfolding as a funeral flower

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    It was short, but very good. Dark poem, for sure.

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    I absolutely loved this poem. powerful words and strong symbolism. can't wait for more of your stuff to come my way. great... just great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Dude, you seriously rule... but you already know that, right? lol keep up the brilliant work!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Very diffrent. i enjoyed reading. it had a certian thing about it. great write.
    Emma

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    Good job on the symbolism in this poem...I haven't read a poem on here like it before...Great job

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