Okay, you are deffinitly on my favorites. You create such an image, not only that; but feeling. You are truly talented in poetry. Excellent.

Wow! i really like this one...i liked the flow and just the concept of the poem... really good!

The ending brings out the best of the poem. it ends really nice...i like how you describe the city too...

Ive been looking for the right word to describe your style of writing but couldnt place it untill i read some of these comments, "unique" is definately the word i was looking for. your work is refreshing. well done

much love and many kisses,
bex