Deceitful Melodies

by Synh   Feb 26, 2006


I walk around the world and leave my memories behind
I try and try but can't seem to ease my troubled mind
My sins will come back to haunt me, they'll get me soon
And there's nothing I can do

I watch the sun fall to the moon
All this reminds of me and you
Your song in my memories is what I fear
I hear it in my heart, I taste it in my tears

The voice of love speaks to me
Singing to deceitful melodies
It laughs through the wind
Screaming its songs will never end

From the fields of lies it calls
You robbed me and stole it all
My emotions are but a myth
You broke my heart and my only grip

My life never knew such sadness
Until you stole my gladness
I now know there's but one thing to do
And that's to get rid of you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow! that was excellent! the rhyming worked well and there was again plenty of emotion! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was really good also. And the last stanza really brought it together. But in the first stanza, It felt a bit shaky, You had 3 very long lines, and then a short one. Maybe in that last line you could say "And there is nothing that I can do" Just to stretch it out abit. But other then that. I loved it. Really enjoyed reading it, Keep it up 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Awesome Poem. I loved it. Very well written peice of poetry. Good Job!

    ~Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    Haunting poem about letting go - and the hardships of love
    Great :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Your poetry shows a lot of emotion - The last line really does strike out at the reader :)

    Peace. [Sole]

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